Thanks to everyone that responded about Cover Letters for Singers. Your suggestions were very helpful.
Bill At 06:26 PM 8/31/01 -0400, you wrote:
>In a message dated 8/30/01 6:41:29 PM, canteclada@y... writes: > ><< I hope Judy Miller answers your query. This is an >area of special expertise for her. >> > >Doris, you've "outed" me! LOL! > >Actually, I thought that your suggestions were quite good--but I can expand >on them a little! ;-) > >One mistake that is frequently made in cover letters is excessive formality >(although this may not apply outside of the United States). Formal language >often seems awkward and stilted to Americans. Instead, try to be >conversational in tone, and be yourself, not Emily Post! > >It's a good idea to read the letter aloud before sending it--and have several >others read and proofread too. When I spot errors in spelling and grammar in >a letter, I'm apt to infer that the writer does not pay attention to details. > >Keep it relatively short and to the point. Be direct. Say that you'd like a >job, or an opportunity to audition. Use the active voice, and avoid overly >long or complex sentences. > >Focus on the reader and his/her needs and interests, not yourself. Keep any >comments about yourself general (eg, I'm an experienced church soloist) and >don't hype yourself. >Let your resume (which should be very factual, not promotional) and your >headshot do most of the work. > >Promise to follow up on a specific date and time, and then DO IT! This is >your chance to make a first impression as someone who is professional, >confident, organized, considerate and detail oriented. > >One of the most effective sections of any letter is the PS. It's the one part >of your letter that is most likely to be read. So try to think of something >interesting or unusual or exciting that you can tag onto the end of your >letter--perhaps it's a mention of a mutual acquaintance, or an invitation to >attend your upcoming recital, or simply an offer to provide references. > >I like to print several copies of my letters--for some reason, my first >signature never seems to look right! > >Last but not least, you should invest in some high quality paper and >envelopes. Make sure that your paper is appropriate for your printer--for >example, sometimes laser toner does not adhere well to papers with high rag >content or a lot of surface texture . You may want to choose a colored stock, >but keep it low key--like soft dove grey or cream. Keep your typeface simple >and elegant (preferably a serif face, they are more legible) and keep the >point size somewhere between 10 and 12. And never send your letter and >headshot in a #10 envelope. A larger envelope will protect your photo and is >more apt to be noticed. >(Be aware that you will need extra postage.) > >Whew! That ought to keep you busy! > >Judy > > > >
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